hey good poem,keep it up and if u want go comment on mines later k well take care and later. Luv Alwayz *SwEeTs*

Heyy AwsoMe poem keep it up ; check out some of mine if you get the chance

awesome

really good...can u read some of mine plz i am am beginner...if u have time...thanks

Beautiful use of language....I'm sorry about your friend or whoever she was....just think about how what she did effected you.....you don't want someone feeling like that now do you? Don't give up.

xxx

LoL, I wrote this poem after I broke up with my only girlfriend. Still I love her, and I fell a bit too deeply for her, but now I can't trust anyone *shifty eyes* We went out for a day, and she dumped me because she found someone else the next day.. hah. But w/e, that and Too Bad She Was Beautiful is about her

Guess what?! Not everyone is the same. You'll find trust in someone...and for that girl that dumped you, not worth it...you don't deserve someone who'll treat you like that...

Truly,
u.b.

P.S. I'm right! ;)

ur poems r good. like i no how u feel losing the one u love.. i have 2. like a guy told me "i love u always remeber that" he did alot for me, and we were like together for like a few months, and i found out like a week ago he never loved me never ment it, it hurts so much, i just feel like since that kinda thing happend to me before, i feel like no other guy could love me.. all b/c the stupid guys in my town. any ways great job on the poem, most of ur poems r good, keep the good work up
love, Jessi

Wow very nice poem. You could tell that all your emotion was in that! The ending truly was something though. the whole thing sounds very painful to you so i hope the pain heals soon.. if it ever will. Anyways very excellent poem. I want to read more of your work. xoxox

you express your feelings wonderfully.
I liked the way you wrote this one specially the ending.
wish you the best,
marjan

Mmm. I love it.