Comments : Embrace Your Death

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    THank you all ahead of time for your commment/votes. I really do cherish every one of them, when i have a bad day i look at them and they always seem to cheer me up..so thank you.

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Incredible...I relate to so much of that...you wrote it beautifully...and the rhyme isn't perfect throughout the whole piece, but seems to flow just as well...I love it.

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Black~Rose

    I can relate to this poem vrey much as well many others will. Never think you're alone because you and many of us feel and think the same way you do. If you talk to someone that feels the same as you do maybe they could help you through if they've got the answers. I've survived my depression and insanity sadly enough but I had to suffer and help myself. Maybe you will be lucky! Great poem by the way. 5/5 please read and comment my poems.

    Thanx & Smile,
    Black~Rose

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenn

    Brillant...you did a wonderful job with this! I like this poem ALOT it was flowing and i can relate as you can tell by my poems... this is another 5/5
    thank you for remembering to comment and rate my poems it means alot to me keep it up lov ya
    xoxox BJ