This poem is very good,I enjoyed it very nice words...Thank you for the comment on my poem it's greatly appreciated,Keep them coming and I will return the favor
<3Naomi

Wow not bad stuff at all, some repetitive lines.

i love ur poem. it is so sweet, and u used words and rhyme perfectly to describe such a state of, well, realized truth.. i specially loved the way u repeeated the lines to show wat uve learned(in the poem).. its a very strong one..
welcome here.. u wont be a new member for long.. ;)
keep it up
nouna

Sounds like a song.

I thought it sounded like a song kinda...but who cares it's beautiful!!! Wow, I'm speechless...that was so beautiful, it brought tears to my eyes!! That was so amazing you are a wonderful poet...welcome to the site and keep up the GREAT work...

xoxo-Sierra Rae

wow...that was awesome...u are a great writer....keep it up!!! 5/5

This is very beautiful, you could have it recorded as a love song..... Wonderful job. Keep up the good work, you are quite talented. Thanks for your comment on my poem

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

wow awsome poem but it sounds like a song well grt work
always smile :)
peaceeee

wow,
awesome poem. i love ur style. who ever she is she is very lucky to have such a beautiful poem written about her. i think people write their best when they r sad or mournig something because they can't lie about it, their emotions r just too strong.
keep it up!
peace
*rachel*

That would make a really awesome song. I love it! Keep it up!

this poem just plain old confused the heck out of me.. maybe its cuz ur older... more mature... but all i know is it confused me.. im sure plenty of other ppl love it tho... keep up the good work for them
amanda

I loved this poem, it's more of a song though. Anyways, I loved the structure of it and it flowed very nicely. Keep it up ♥