........AWESOME.

oooh i likey
very nice

Cool Story. Good job from the mind of the narrator, but I was left wanting something from the opposite side too. But Maybe that is just me.

I love dark poems as you probably already know by reading my poetry! I like this poem because you have left something to the imagination! It was dark and well written! We are always are worst critics! Take Care! Brooke~

I liked it a lot, Dark poems are my favourite and this was fantastic, dark and leaving me wanting more.. well done..

This stanza stuck out to me the most
"Without time to even think
I fired round after round
They penetrated his pale white skin
But no trace of blood could be found"

The descriptions were amazing, just wow

brilliant work

keep it up

xxxxxxx

Very good poem! keep it up

This is really good! I like it! 5/5!

awww that was such a sad poem. but i liked it alot. it had a good flow going. awesome job 5/5

Wow.
That was good.
I enjoyed reading it.