Love without you

by Hans Fausto   Jul 24, 2005


Whenever i think of you
a smile brushes through my face
and my eyes sparkle with glee

True colors do arise
whenever Im with you
the love i hide in the darkest of depths
comes out because of you

now everyday i always wonder
what life would be without love
and what love would be without you..

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tiny Reader

    I think that this has good sentiment behind the poem, but the structure and rhythm could do with a bit of work. I would say that it's a good start to a poem. I'll check out some of your others.
    Sarah x

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    This is really cute...Maybe you could elaborate a little more on what life and love would be without this girl...just an idea, i'm sure it doesn't matter...

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