Excellent job, very original and well-expressed. Repetition is used well in this poem.

AMAZING! I have to agree with Stormy:

Outward smiles of inward pain

It really stuck out to me! YOur a great writer!
Much Love
~*hAiLy*~

I love this part:

She looks in the mirror and hates what she sees
Reflections of internal sorrow and eternal miseries
Scars from emotional wounds and wretched screams
Cursed to live a life of inner chaos and broken dreams

the words you use are so mesmerizing...i'm falling in love!! lol you're a great writer...keep it up!

xoxo-Sierra Rae

wow, This poem is so poweful, I loved it, it's beautiful. I wish i possessed as much talent as you do, you're a great writer. wow It's just so beautiful!

Another beautiful write. Sad and touching yet quite powerful. You have an amazing talent. Keep up the wonderful work.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Very nicely done!!!

hey there!! another great work from you!! amazing... have u ever thought of goin in to songwriting... i see these as more of lyrics than a poem!!!! i cud just immagine wut it would sound like!!! take care!

*~peace and love~*

i really like this poem! it really does apply to alot of girls in this world today! not that it is a good thing! but....it is the truth! if you get a chance plez comment and rate my poems!

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was awesome!!!