With You

by TragicRomance   Jul 25, 2005


Ever since I learned your name,
my life just hasn't been the same;

With you, I don't have to pretend,
I know you'll be there in the end;

You were there right from the start,
nothing can ever tear us apart;

With you, my feelings, I never had to hide,
In you, you know I can confide;

You love me in a special way,
that's how I know you're here to stay;

With you, the feeling is so right,
especially when you're holding mr tight;

You will never look in the other direction,
you are always giving me affection,

With you, I forget about all my fears,
t seems like it all just dissapears;

You never could let me down,
I really love it when you're around;

With you, I don't have to figure out why,
you really are the perfect guy;

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Okay you know what i noticed and this may sound harsh but oh well im not trying to be mean im reading your poems and they flow well and everything and they rhyme well but the message what the poem is actually saying isnt getting to me...like i read this twice and now im commenting thinking wait what was the poem about...love...okay but maybe dont be so simple change the format of your poem i know this one suits you well and probably comes easy for you but stepping out of your comforst zone creates cretivity i like your style of writing but i think you should try something different just once

  • 18 years ago

    by *NiCoLe*

    aww felicia thats really good...you really do have talent...keep it up...5/5