I believe tis a good poem, just one thing though.... YOU'VE got a few things from a poem I was writing but nevermind you may keep them. This reminds me of my style but very lil. 5/5 I think it is good, but if your going to write such things enrich the text a bit more.

Verry inspirational poem Hun, underlining that we must act now, or dig our own grave. Great :D Kind regards from Kane x

Very Good Poem Keep it Up i look foward to reading more

I LOVE THIS POEM HUN!! =]
*hugs* *mwuah mwuahzzz* lol!!

hows m'baby squeeks?? miss you hun... i'm gonna be out for a while...

Love ya, Flo

that was good... makes me wanna make my little brothers go pretend to be MEN!! lol.... good tho

~*~Ashley~*~