i was my first poem so plz comment and think me what you think

very short....the ryming was ok...i think you might wanna add on to this one a bit and improve it i gave it a 4....it shows that you got some real talent tho if you'll just put in some effort!! good poem

good emotions almost is like a love poem?

Good job

-Josiah

short but gud... its s sweet dorta plea.. i noe that i wud always need my frends with me..
"together we will walk this land"
i love that line.. itspeaks volumes..
keep goin
nouna

I can really relate to this poem, I feel the exact same way. Great Job. ღ

You have a GREAT talent, I just don't think that you're living up to it...Try to enrich this just a little more...maybe add a stanza or change the rhyming scheme...just a thought...

Such a sad yet meaningful poem. 5/5, Em