My Broken Pieces

by Joy   Jul 26, 2005


A year ago this day,
All I wanted to do was die,
Everything was all messed up,
And all I could do was cry.

He had broken my heart,
And I was obsessed with weight,
With all this happening to me,
How could I believe in fate?

I took that blade to my wrist,
More often than I wanted to,
My true friends knew something was up,
But there was nothing they could do.

Finally spring rolled around,
So I began to take my life back,
I picked up the broken pieces of me,
And started to come back on track.

The one who broke my heart,
Confessed his love for me,
So we started going out together,
And I thought we were meant to be.

It's been over four months,
But my fairytale is dying away,
It seems like our perfect relationship,
Is beginning to decay.

He's pressuring me to do so much,
And I'm only fourteen,
Things seemed so much easier,
When I was just a pre-teen.

I love him so much,
Though he doesn't seem to respect me,
It'd kill me to break it off,
But he's the one with the key.

I won't let him force me,
Into situations that I can't bare,
My depression's slowly coming back,
And no one seems to care...

**Yeah, I really don't cut, I just put that in for a "dramatic" effect...**

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  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    well.. i lykd ur poem, with all the rhyme and the deep words.. i glad u wont let him "force u into situations u cant bare", but it shudnt come at the cost of ur happiness.. u shudnt be depressed, but u shud be gald u put ur foot down and spoke ur mind.. dun let any1 make u d things u dun wanna do.. and i noe this is hard 4 u, especially that u love him and all, but in situations like this, u shud set ur priorities straight... maybe talkin it over with him wud make it a lil better
    hope things work out
    i love ur piece
    take care
    nouna

  • 18 years ago

    by miracle

    Hi, i love this poem so much, a year ago i was the same.. well i had other problems but that is the way i felt i was broken, now it's al coming back and i don't know what to do either
    I can't move on with the boyfriend i now have 'cause he keeps reminding me, as i listen to your boyfriend he does seems not to respect you And that is the thing a relationship is build on for sure.. You should listen too foolish from ashanti ;) that's what i listen too all the time.. Ofcourse i give you a 5 for this poem the way you can describe things is macnificent, please comment on some of mine too i would apreciate it .. Keep up the good work, and don't let anyone stand you in the way of your dreams

  • 18 years ago

    by Dan

    being as u asked, this guy sounds like an @ssh0le, he obviuosly doesnt love u if hes pressuring u into all of these things u dont want to do, i think u should find some1 else, u must realize that there are plenty of other guys out there for u, it is not worth being depressed over, U WILL FIND SOME1 ELSE.

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