great poem... Nice to nwo some guys care about staying true...

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i like your poem thank you for comment on mine but can you plz comment on my new one without you thank you

again i really liked this poem. awesome job

Cheaters... *shakes head slowly* Very nicely done.

"I got dressed
and then made the bed
I wake down stairs
my girl was no were to be found"

^ Do you mean "I walk downstairs?"

Thank you for the comment :)

xxx

lol yes I did mean that thank you I will fix that!

-Josiah