My Lost Love

by lindzy   Jul 27, 2005


Matt I told you once
That you were my light
Who conquered all my fears
And made my days so bright

But who would have thought
It'd be you to break my heart
To shatter it to pieces
And leave it broken and apart

There never was a love
Quite as special as ours was
It filled my empty heart right up
As only true love does

But now you're gone forever
And my days are left bare
I wish I could get over you
And I wish I didn't care

You took my fragile being
And everything I "am"
All because you gave up
And you didn't give a damn

My heart, it's laying shattered
Upon my tear-stained floor
My heartbroken cries have cut
Right down to my very core

My eyes are never dry
Because I'm crying over you
My mouth hasn't smiled
Since you told me we were through

My heart doesn't ache
Because it's no longer there
It's fallen in to darkness
As I've fallen to despair

The flowers do no bloom
In my gloomy mind
No budding trees or chirping birds
Will you ever find

Just a gloomy desolation
Of crying, loss, despair
And all the while I'm wishing
That you could still care

A hardened blackened soul
Reigns upon this teen
Whose pain will go unnoticed
And troubles go unseen

No friends to help me through this
I'm left without a trace
Of any human life form
Or any friendly face

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  • 18 years ago

    by riceth mafe

    very emotional and mature. i love the use of words which make the piece beautiful. nakkatouch.....

  • 18 years ago

    by kogarah poet

    This poem felt like it had eyes... because through eyes you can see anything and eyes show exactly how a person feels. I can totally identify with this poem because its written so well with so much feeling. Rhyming pattern is really good and it has a nice rhythm too.
    Very good job, keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by manda

    i thought that was absolutly awesome, i can't believe how you captured even my feelings in that it's like you can really see exactly how im feeling lol. nah but that was probably one of the best poems i've read in along time
    keep up the great work
    luv manda :)

  • 18 years ago

    by K1n9d0m

    i really felt your fellings it wasa great poem but some mistakes with the words but dont worry about that it will all work out in the end and keep up the great work

  • 18 years ago

    by BruisedxandxBroken

    i really like this poem it clearly describes the feelings of despair over lost love , this poem has a great fleuncy that poems of this emotion rarey posess due to the fact that the artist is usually more concerned with describing their feelings than the actual form of the poetry and yet you pulled it off beautifully balancing form and feeling......5/5 (spelling mistakes are not as important as the quality of the poem)

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