Comments : How should I begin. (Monotetra)

  • 16 years ago

    by Victoria

    I like the style you are brave to try something like this and have done it very well!

    take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Victoria,

    Thanks for your comment, this is my first humble attempt at writing a poem using the Monotetra form.

    Regards,

    Steve

  • 16 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Hi Bob,

    You may be well be right, I will check on Michael Walker's page to confirm the requirements and do a better job next time. First time I try the form. Thanks for the comments.

    Regards,

    Steve

  • 16 years ago

    by brittany

    wow i lived it ur great

  • 16 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    absolutely amazing!!! i love the format... i had never heard of it before. keep up the great work!
    -xXx-

  • 16 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Hey, cool poem, enjoyed it. Listen, when u get the chance, could u rate & comment my new poem “A Wishing Dreamer”... I would appreciate it. Thanks.. and good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Strange Angel

    This is really cool! i've never read a poem in this format, but it makes it really interesting and different. It really does have a song like quality as well...i love the topic you picked too!
    overall a truely great poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Nicely donr Steve, another great piece!!!