I like the style you are brave to try something like this and have done it very well!

take care

Victoria,

Thanks for your comment, this is my first humble attempt at writing a poem using the Monotetra form.

Regards,

Steve

Hi Bob,

You may be well be right, I will check on Michael Walker's page to confirm the requirements and do a better job next time. First time I try the form. Thanks for the comments.

Regards,

Steve

wow i lived it ur great

absolutely amazing!!! i love the format... i had never heard of it before. keep up the great work!
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Hey, cool poem, enjoyed it. Listen, when u get the chance, could u rate & comment my new poem “A Wishing Dreamer”... I would appreciate it. Thanks.. and good job

This is really cool! i've never read a poem in this format, but it makes it really interesting and different. It really does have a song like quality as well...i love the topic you picked too!
overall a truely great poem!

Nicely donr Steve, another great piece!!!