Dear Diary

This is my favourite of your work. I've seen it tackled before many times and never liked the diary aspect of it, found it tired and infantile. This however I think is a breath of fresh air for a long dead subject.

Its form is as can be expected from a diary and you find yourself almost asking if you yourself write your diary in rhymes and this is actually a selection of clipped out bits. Thats perhaps the nicest of thoughts it conjurs up.

A dead subject is given new life in a delightful poem. The best thing about it, it does not come across as an attempt to get sympathy or attention as most of this kind usually do.
Drusus

This poem seems so real.. kind of like what someone would actually right in there diary.. probably without the rhyming though. lol. But the realness within it gave the poem a very nice effect. The flow and rhythm was really good and held up very well. Great job on this! 5/5

I LOVED this!
It is one of my favourite poems I have read on the site.
I thought that everything fit perfectly on this, you did a wonderful job.

Graet poam
5/5
i really relate to some of it thats one of the keys to a great poem.

Awh, that was good hun. The flow was good and I liked how you wrote to your diary. The descripitons were good but I felt more detail could have gone into them. Nicely done though 5/5