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excellent...i was so sad and heartfelt....i feel so bad my best friend didnt die but she moved 6 states away...i kinda know how that feels in a way....great poem 5/5

it's a great poem...I'm not sure I like the end though...why did you have to die in it? **Sniff sniff** Well, great write! Keep it up!

Emotional poem, seemed as though it came straight from the heart which, quite often can make the best poems, I loved the way you wrote it, it had a sad ending which made it more interesting, I didn't get bored during the poem either which is good, well done, good poem

--chow for now
**Long live lemons

wow great poem...really filled with emotion...awesome job....plz r/r/c on any of mine..thanks luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Wow very nice poem. You could tell that all your emotion was in that! The ending truly was something though But this poem was awesome! Great job with everything very talented. 5/5!

Very interesting poem. The ending took me by surprise.

this is a really nice poem i gave it a 5

I can relate so much to this poem right now..

Wow, awsome poem. I loved it.
~ItalianStallion A.K.A. Joe~

I like it Lex

That was really good. sad but good. i loike the lining. the flow is different but it works. good job.

Good one

I like this poem srry i cant put u for my fav. i just dont do favs lol well keep it up laura aka sweets