Love's disaster

by LovesTragedy   Jul 27, 2005


You seize me like a distant dream,
something soft and unspoken;
i try to get to you - try to reach your drifting mind
but no ... your a wish left unmade.

You stride so close to me it seems you know how i feel,
whispers lingering through the strands of life -- this misconception its unreal.

You know my thoughts
the way you make my body crave,
yet you leave me- standing here waiting for those three worlds that will complete me.

Your a disappointment, a let down and a failure;
a ransom note for this heart that was once yours .

--- please just read these poems. it'd crush me to see them beside someone else's name ..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Suchapoetictradgedy

    -standing here waiting for those three worlds that will complete me.

    Thats the one thing I didnt quite get.....but other than that I loved it, and I think the emotion was conveyed very strongly!!!!! Good Job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Brady

    I love it It has so much articulation that it makes it emotional. Good Job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    I really like you're style, kinda reminds me of the how the narrator in Fight Club, and that's my favorite movie so i could read your poems all day lol these are really good and the way you don't rhyme is pretty cool makes it have a more edgy sound i guess

    You know my thoughts
    the way you make my body crave,
    yet you leave me

    that's my favorite line because i can relate to that and i know those guys too well but yeah your great 5/5

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