dude this is so cute, youre so good at writing poems =) hehe so cute! aww loser keep up the good work oscar "the loser" baldo =D lol jk

Oh wow...that's gorgeous...do you think you could tutor my boyfriend? jk! It's absolutely beautiful! I'd give it a 7/5! I love the way you wrote it!

oh wow..i am speechless that was just amazin in every way....good job..5/5. i like it. It explains so much..great job.. xoxo Crystal

hey i like this i know exactly how ya feel cus i have a man that im goin through the same emotions with babe love it

This was really good! It was soo sweet! keep up the good work! 5/5

That was a really sweet poem !! Keep it up !!
Xxx Charli Xxx ~*~

wow great wrk i loved it:) keep up the good wrk5/5

Great poem, I really enjoyed

awwww.. that was really good and cute and well, sorta depressing but thats besides the point.. it was still good

i dont unerstand how you could love fighting with the one you love every night, or how you could love them breaking your heart...i know how that is bcuz me and my boyfriend constantly fight and i always hope and pray it would be the last but it never seems to end but i hate it so much bcuz i love him so much...

VERY GOOD i love the way it was formatted, and how you made every line rhyme with the one b4....great job the whole poem was great!!!! KEEP WRITING!!! your so good and i wanna keep readin 'em so i cant wait to read more!!!!!!!! GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The first one and the last one I can really relate to plz comment and vote on some of mine I Love your work I'm reading more

Plus it was nice to write it was written by a guy x

wow... that was a great poem. and the way that you wrote it is very original. now thats what i call true love... fully loving the person that you love for who the are... the good AND the bad... none is perfect and its those imperfections that make that special person perfect to you. great poem. keep on writing!

come read some of my poems if and when you please to do so...

this is a really fantastic poem.... very unique but so sweet lol kk

love,
silly

this is such an awsome poem...i enjoyed it alot!!!!!

that was sweet who was it for?

aww!! so cute!! great poem 5/5
luv courtie

This is soooo sweet and lovely.....Made me think about my boyfriend!!! Very beautifully written...Keep up the good work

Ohh and welcome to the club =0)

*Hugs sabrina*

Great job!! Very descriptive!! I am glad you have someone like that in your life!! 5/5 Keep writing!!