LONELY (me n my best mate made it up)

by ♥x__Pwincess danii//   Jul 28, 2005


It’s hard to explain
The emptiness all around
You can feel it in the air
And the silence… there is no sound

You can see people laughing
But you think they don’t understand
They don’t know your pain
Therefore, cannot lend a hand

They don’t know you…
You hide yourself away
You hide your emotions
Hoping they won’t stay

You think you are alone
You think they won’t care
But do you know what they are feeling
And if their true emotions are there

We are all the same, full of sadness
And the hollow feeling is everywhere
The people aren’t real
Because they think no-one will care

The chilled air runs through
The cold and empty lives
The whisper, the creek
Of the people in disguise

The sun darkens
As the shadows creep
There’s an isolated feeling
As the world begins to weep

It has no strength to stand
On its own two feet
The world is like a person
Cold and hurt in a lonely street

That person has no world
No life different from any other
We’re all the same
No matter how much past we uncover

We all have that lonely feeling
That the weakened trust
Burt up anger
And a world without lust

An empty corner
With nothing to hide
The hollow hole
That’s kept covered inside

You hear b-miner
The saddest chord there is
The plays over and over
As you hope for an inch of bliss

I’ve seen the lies in every promise
I’ve seen the face of betrayal
And as each day passes
We wait for our true selves to unveil

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  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Wow i really LOVED that one. i'm sure everyone could relate..sent chills up my spine.
    take care and keep writing
    x x x

  • i think this is an awsome poem, i love the way you wrote it.
    plz comment on sum of my poems i would really appreciate it
    thx
    *michelle*