Good poem i liked it.
Emma4/5

Very original idea. I like the way you changed ''I want'' to ''I need.'' 5/5

Very original idea. I like the way you changed ''I want'' to ''I need.'' 5/5

I agree with Missy, it was a great poem and good idea. keep it up and dont stop writing!

I dunn0,.. the first 2 poems i've read are pretty cliche.. id like to see some rhyme and rhythm within them,.. and it seems like u stay on one idea.. try to create more imagery and feeling with ur works.. theyre noit bad, but could be improved.. pZ

I know how it feels, well like..how to be in the opposite position where the girl is telling me this, it was great, you're very creative and very good! the only suggestion, your title should be OF your arms...you have Or, lol newayz 5/5

WAY to much repetition, this poem blew me away in a bad way....you have no diversity from basic words,your choice of lines are the same the whole poem through and this was not fun to read at all.

I like the thought you had behind the poem but i think you repeated your self too much i give it a 4

Oh so true... i think you couldve made the end flow a little bit better, but overall its good

I like how its sort of a diamante poem almost....its really good

The safeness of your arms i like that part..reallt good5/5

Ok, it didnt really rhyme and it was hard to keep a steady flow. you should mix it up a bit.

Very good i liked that it was like in two parts,kinda different 5/5

Nice i like ..really good..5/5

Im not to sure about this one .... kinda feels the same all the way through ... i would work on this a little...

Very unique stanza. It was wonderful. You are very talented.

I didnt really like this one for some odd reason...3/5

Good job 5/5
Becky
xoxo

Awwl.. That poem is a heartbreaker. But I still absoluetly loved it. I can tell that you put alot of emotion into it and thats what made it so great! Great Job cannot wait to read more of your work. I would have given it a 6 xox Britney xox And by the way sorry it took me soo long to comment back. your veri talentd xox

This is great!! kinda hard to follow but great!!

~shanny~