wow excellent poem. nice flow. one suggestion. it would be better if you separated them into stanzas.

Good poem but try writing it out long instead of like in a paragraph thing but outher then tht i really like it

Wow hun short but brill :) xox

Wow! This is inspiring! I love it! Your a great writer.

Wow! This is inspiring! I love it! Your a great writer.

'bitter lessons of love'--- oh, that was touchy.... you're very talented..
loved it

keep writing...

Love,
Ipsita