i liked this poem, i liked your choice of words, the picture u painted was clear, and u invited the reader into you horizon

This is a great poem. I feel like I steped right into your place.

Another well written poem! I can relate I have felt that way before too! You expressed your feelings perfect! ~Brooke~

o my god i love love love this one. just a couple of days i felt like this. but then he proved me wrong when he said he wanted to be with me forever... all you have to do is hang on to the person and believe in them 5/5...i love it

wow, i really enjoyed reading this poem, for one it reminded me of a memory of my own, and two it seems that many times in my past I know such a thing was true.. I give it a 5.. good job!

well written ... it seems to be more of a sad poem to me ... i like how u used hush in the poem though ... well done 5/5

:( really good write it remind me of my ex tho :( 5/5

This poem is so beautiful
a clear picture
something which too many people can relate to! never the less, brill!

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