NEVER

by Catty   Jul 30, 2005


I sit across the room as I stare quietly at you,
Hoping this love I’ve found will someday be true,
But then the sharp pain in my heart never fails to remind me,
That your love will never, really ever, seem to find me,
And forever I’ll sit staring at you from here,
As I try desperately to hold back this single wet tear,
Your kiss will never touch my sweet lips,
And your hands will never find their way to my softly curved hips,
My back will never feel the nice chills down my spine,
When those soft hands of yours are places so gently in mine,
My eyes will never see your smile coming my way,
When you spot me in the distance day after day,
And I’ll never know the feeling of your skin on my skin,
Because its me, I know, you’ll never be interested in

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ari

    You are making me cry cause that is the exact case w/ me. i'm so sad! 10/5!

    xox

    Ariel

  • 18 years ago

    by skye16

    I like your poem. I can totally relate. Ofcourse I'm a boy though. lol.

  • 18 years ago

    by nikki

    another great poem youve got talent keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Synyster

    Pretty good poem. I take it you had your heart broken by a crush..? Ouch. It happens. On the poem, nice phrasing, but it still needs a little work. I noticed a few typos. Also, on your second couplet, I wouldn't repeat "me" as your end-rhyme word. The style I write in, I won't ever repeat the same end words in a couplet unless I am repeating the line for emphasis. But I'm not sure yet on your writing style. I don't ever give 5/5 because I believe that there's always room for improvement. No one's ever perfect. So I gave you a 4/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kelly L

    I love this one too! You did a great job avoiding the cliches.

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