The day that she met you...

by ShaeBaeBae   Jul 31, 2005


Her roses were dead
Her violets were too,
Her sugar wasn't sweet
Until the day she met you
Now her roses are red
Her violets are blue,
Her sugar is sweet
Now that she knows you
The day that you met
Was an almost pleasant surprise
On account of
You weren't like all of the other guys
The first sentence that you said to her,
Was actually very funny,
You said "Hi I'm apartment
I am looking for an Javany"
That was long ago
Though it seems like yesterday,
But now you have kids,
If it is not too bold to say
From the moment that you met
From the day you said I do,
You made a vow to cherish
To each other, the bride and groom
Now you bring up a family
Even though it's hard work to do,
But life will always be easier,
If you know that i love you!

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  • 18 years ago

    by AnAstAciA

    That was wonderful...
    "Her roses were dead
    Her violets were too,
    Her sugar wasn't sweet
    Until the day she met you
    Now her roses are red
    Her violets are blue,
    Her sugar is sweet
    Now that she knows you
    The day that you met"

    With this lyrics i can totally relate...good job:) 5/5
    *pls check mine and tell me what you think:)

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    That Poem was Great...Really Great...And dont worry about the poem thing..i understand you made a mistake were human were not perfect but thank you for commentin them..i appreciated it...5/5
    Great Job
    Ttyl sometime PeAcE
    ~The Poet~

  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    Nice job new way to use the "rose are red and violest are blue" keep upo teh good work