Every waking moment

by sarah   Jul 31, 2005


Every waking moment
that lives inside me
i recall the love you sent
your kiss fun and free
every feeling inside
that keeps me going
i won't let anything hide
i'll keep it showing
every kiss you give me
that shows me the way
i love how you are cuddly
and all that you say
every guy any guy
none compares to you
theres no reason to ask why
just simply
im in love with you

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  • 18 years ago

    by Brandy

    That was great I am so into it. I love writing love poems and reading them but I hate getting writers block. But any who e-mail me sometime cowgirl32202@yahoo.com so we can talk

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Beautiful poem, rich with love and feeling. Love has a poweful emotion to write about, you've really shown this here!

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura Ash

    This poem is so beautiful! thank you for the comment you left me before. =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Terrific poem, loved how it ended!! So glad you have a man to make you feel that way!! I def. rate this a five! Its so worth it!
    Kind Regards
    ~Chelsey~

  • 18 years ago

    by Mark

    beautiful poem! 5/5 i wrote that poem "slave" after wactching, life and death in rome lol, i was bored. thnx 4 the comment :)

    love mark xxx