One Day

by fallen angel   Aug 1, 2005


Every time i see you I feel the life being squeezed out of me
Ever breath harder to take in
Then I realize that I've already lost you
Its not me that you search for in a crowded room or even in the emptiest of spaces
You seek her, your new love, you act as if you never cared.
I still hold the love for you the same as I did when we first met, its just now I wonder
How could I have ever let you go?
Let you slip away from me into another's arms
One day this torture will end and I will find love again
Until then I'm alone, in the dark, waiting to hear your voice

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    I agree with Kane, loosing someone is so hard, especially when you see what you had when they give it to another! Great job though! Stay strong!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kane Burden

    Know the feeling! When loosing something, but only afterwards realising what they truly meant to you :( It was beautfully portrayed in this poem though! keep up the good work ;) Kind regards from Kane

  • 18 years ago

    by the middle

    this is a really good poem!
    i can relate... awesome work!
    take care,
    xoxoxo
    (btw...thanku for commenting on my poem! you have no idea how much it meant to me!)

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    this is a good poem your good keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by brittany

    great wrk

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