wow nice i really like this poem even though it is sad ... i love the ending it is actually one of the best endings i have seen ... well done on this poem 5/5

I love this poem I can relate to it alot I hate feeling like that.
keep it up 5/5

wow it was great reading ur stuff keep ur brilliant work up

I really liked the rhyming and flow of this poem. It was very good. Keep it up

it flows really good! oh i love this one!!!

wow hun this was beautiful u truly are talented! xox

That's a really sad poem. Different from all the suicide poems I've read. Most of the others are about cutting. Good approach, and great imagery. Keep up the good work :)

I think this poem is very captivating.. it kinda stays in you mind for a while.
it is indeed very good to have variation in this page, you managed well ;) keep writing!