IS IT OKAY????

by midnight   Aug 2, 2005


Is it OK that i like to cuddle till mid-afternoon?
is it OK that i would rather watch the sun go down then spend money?
is it OK that i would like to lay on your chest and listen to your heart beat before i fall sleep?
is it OK that i am a little crazy?
is it OK that i am a little shy?
is it OK that i think your sweet?
is it OK that i think your cute?
is it OK that i like you?
is it OK that i hope to one day be with you?

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  • 18 years ago

    by ash

    That is so cute, i love it. keep it up. i love all of your entries. there great. ill comment more on what i think of your other ones. comment me.

  • 18 years ago

    by Brian n Josh

    hey, i love the whole repition way of writing a poem! i believe that it really gets a point across. thanks for the comments on my poem! - brian (p.s. it is ok)

  • 18 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Heya.. great poem... i likd it. Listen, wehn you have the chance.. could u rate&comment my new poem A wishing Dreamer? I would appreciate it.. Well keep on writing.. and good job!

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