omg, wow. that poem was amazing! francisco, you are an awsome writer. there is a girl out there somewhere for you. she is searching for a guy just like you, and even if she isn't there now, she will be when the time is right. you are still young, and have a whole life ahead of you. live it, with or without that girl. i promise u will find her. for now, just keep writing.
lia jnell

BLOODY HELL Mate, You write brilliantly I'm ashamed I try someone is dying to be read this it will make some girls heart melt gorgeous write keep it up thx for my comment xxxxx

Nice poem, I think you should read my poem "If Wishes Came True"...

omg this poem is just like..wow..I loved it probably the best poem ive read all day!thanks for commenting on mine!keep writing and keep up the good work!
x0x0
<3Chelsea

I am grateful that you asked me to read your poem. i only wish i could write like you. good work!!!!!!

WELL THAT POEM WAS A GREAT POEM I LIKE HOW YOU KEPT THE THEME GOING THROUGH OUT THE WHOLE POEM GREAT JOB AND THANKS FOR THE COMMENT

HAVE YOU READ ANY OF MY OTHER POEMS, I THINK YOU WOULD LIKE THEM BC WE ARE ON THE SAME TRACK SORTA LOL YOU SHOULD READ MY DEATH BECAUSE OF YOU ITS A POEM I WROTE ABOUT MY COUSINS GF, AND SOON IT WILL BE TRUE IF SHE DOESNT DO ANYTHING ABOUT IT

Wow! I really like it!

Hey! GRE AT poem! I liked it! it was really good. better than any of mine at least.... but yea... keep up the good work.

GrEaT pOeM dUdE!

GrEaT pOeM dUdE!

Cute poem. Keep writting.

Lovely poem.

Steve

That was really good i liked it, You've definatly got talent. Keep it up babe!

Much love ~ Jess

nice job wow it was great i love this part

"For I have not much to offer..
But my heart and soul
So let me promise her that..."

thats all a girl asks of a guy well that gose for me keep it up 5/5

wow that was really good...the girl of ur dreams is lucky and if she doesnt already have u than she sould want u haha...well that was awesome...

wow. amazing poem. i love this poem. it has so much feeling put into it. best of luck to ya with ur dream girl probs.... thanks for the comment on mmine meant alot!!! lots o love to ya!!!

awwww.....that is sooo sweet...I hope you find her...whoever she may be! great poem though...5/5

beautiful! u are definitely talented! keep up the great work! 5/5

plz check mine out too!

oh how sweet! well written awesome...
keep writing,
take care xoxoxo