Comments : I Need A Helping Hand

  • 18 years ago

    by LOST iN LOVE

    I liked this poem.It was definately worth while to read.keep writing!
    x0x0
    <3Chelsea

  • 18 years ago

    by gorgeouslilmissy

    hey this poem is really good welldone!!
    *5/5*
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by DANI

    this is really good u got talent!! 5/5xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by why me

    hey i thought this was very good email me at twistedsoul29@yahoo.com and i have messenger for yahoo if u wanna ya no
    k c ya

  • 18 years ago

    by heather

    oh i really liked it..great job
    i give you a 5/5 nice job!!! i like the way you express your self!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by *Emmy*

    hey astton.. it was good.. nice job! keep it up! it looked like it came from inside ur heart... very nice!
    xoxo
    emmy

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    aww...I'm here for you. You can take my hand whenevr you need it!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by JLT

    Great poem. It's beautiful:) Keep up the good work sweets *hugs*

    ~Jessica

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Ashton, that was a excillent poem. Very creative, and insightful. Has much depth and soul towards it as well. Well done. Definetly a 5.

    -Jennifer.

  • 18 years ago

    by Unforgiven Retniap doolb

    I loved it! it flows pretty well but not great but other then that the meaning jumps right out ......good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    I think this is good but it could use a little work...Your rhyme pattern is on then off again...try fixing that

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥Madison Meeks♥

    very good poem and very well writen.keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Minkus

    Very good, the imagery is excellent and the wording's creative. 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by hunnibunnz

    great poem ashton..you really put a lot into this one.. awesome jobb!

    -Take acre & lotsa' luv hun
    ---Kristina

  • 18 years ago

    by ChrisT

    Wow thats a good song to i really like it but the other song id have to say it better lol well yeah keep writing songs and poems they are good

  • 18 years ago

    by Illusion

    This is a really good poem..you wrote it very well..I can relate to it..

    5/5

    DFK

  • 18 years ago

    by Anarchy-In-The-UK

    I liked reading it very much...

    Even though I never have felt like any person understood me for real then I could still tell how you felt through your poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tigger

    Hey Ashton I really loved this poem. So keep writting and I hope to see more of your poems.

  • 18 years ago

    by xxVictoriaxxTheresexx

    Great job ashton..could'nt have writen a better one..keep it up 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason

    Damn, this poem is good, I can feel the emotion in it. Keep up the good work. 5/5
    ~J.T.~