I liked this poem.It was definately worth while to read.keep writing!
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<3Chelsea

hey this poem is really good welldone!!
*5/5*
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this is really good u got talent!! 5/5xxx

hey i thought this was very good email me at twistedsoul29@yahoo.com and i have messenger for yahoo if u wanna ya no
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oh i really liked it..great job
i give you a 5/5 nice job!!! i like the way you express your self!!!

hey astton.. it was good.. nice job! keep it up! it looked like it came from inside ur heart... very nice!
xoxo
emmy

aww...I'm here for you. You can take my hand whenevr you need it!!!

Great poem. It's beautiful:) Keep up the good work sweets *hugs*

~Jessica

Ashton, that was a excillent poem. Very creative, and insightful. Has much depth and soul towards it as well. Well done. Definetly a 5.

-Jennifer.

I loved it! it flows pretty well but not great but other then that the meaning jumps right out ......good job

I think this is good but it could use a little work...Your rhyme pattern is on then off again...try fixing that

very good poem and very well writen.keep up the good work.

Very good, the imagery is excellent and the wording's creative. 5/5.

great poem ashton..you really put a lot into this one.. awesome jobb!

-Take acre & lotsa' luv hun
---Kristina

Wow thats a good song to i really like it but the other song id have to say it better lol well yeah keep writing songs and poems they are good

This is a really good poem..you wrote it very well..I can relate to it..

5/5

DFK

I liked reading it very much...

Even though I never have felt like any person understood me for real then I could still tell how you felt through your poem!

Hey Ashton I really loved this poem. So keep writting and I hope to see more of your poems.

Great job ashton..could'nt have writen a better one..keep it up 5/5

Damn, this poem is good, I can feel the emotion in it. Keep up the good work. 5/5
~J.T.~