A Petal

by LonelyNightsHurt   Aug 3, 2005


I'm grieving for a dear friend
Who's lost some one so close
And at her funeral, upon her coffin
He realeased a bright red rose

Upon this rose in which he threw down
Were petals for a beautiful soul
And as he released his final goodbye
In his heart started to grow a hole

A petal for all of the good times
A petal for all of the bad
A petal for all of the times they helped eachother
And a petal for now feeling sad

A petal for hope, and one for love
And another one for death
A petal for his regrets, and continuous wishes
And a petal for her dearest last breath

***This is kind of true...It's about someone i care deeply for.... comments would be appreciated....thankyou***

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  • 18 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    Hey, i really liked this, it's beautifuly written and there is sooooo much emotion in it. I hope you're holding out okay, cos i know how hard it is when someone you're close to dies.
    Good Job !!
    XxXxXxX Cici XxXxXxX

  • 18 years ago

    by Illusion

    I love the way you wrote this poem. It reminds me of a day dream I had actually.....sorta weird. You did a great job writing this, I love your work.

    DFK

  • 18 years ago

    by Crystal

    its very touching brit.... its sad.... and sweet... i liked it....

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