wow that was a long one! keep it up bud

wow....this was amazing....just amazing..great rhyme and great flow...holy crap lol good job!!! luv yas mwah... oh yea 5/5

-kayla-

pretty poem!...although sometimes the rhyming goes off the rest is okay!...ill give it a 5!

awww... Lost love's are the one's you miss the most, and often the one's that meant the most.. It sucks realising, only after their gone, that they meant so much to you :'( This is an extremely well written poem, and is beautifully portrayed! Speak to you soon hun, from Kane x

WOW! this poem was amazing. i loved it. it had great rhyming and awesome flow. 5/5

Just because I'm never at the thread to talk to you doesn't mean I abandoned you here. This was an extremely well written work sweetie. 5/5
I sent you an email not long ago but I don't remeber getting another one.

Wow very nice poem. You could tell that all your emotion was in that! The ending truly was something though. And im sorry that he has gone away, But this poem was awesome! Great job with everything very talented. 5/5!

Hehehe You did a great job Amanda.
I'm proud of you *hugs* 5/5

Oh wow, seems like your really good at poetry I loved the poem, it's sad and sweet. I gave it a 5!

that was really good... seems like u had good/bad relationships with people... be you.. if they want you they gotta accept WHO you are... keep it up

~*~Ashley~*~