Regrets
by fallen angel Aug 3, 2005
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I said goodbye, when I meant to say see you soon. |
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18 years ago
by Mandy Lou
This is really really sweet. I think that you could make it a little better though. You have the rhyming pattern down, I just think that you could enrich the text a little, make it longer or something...
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18 years ago
by Kelsey
I really like the poem other than the little bit that says "I'm back now" I know it's important but it just doesn't seem to fit in.
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18 years ago
by Kayla
aww what a sad poem but so true...ive had that happen to.... well anyways good job...luv yas mwah
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18 years ago
:) loved it!
Jacs
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18 years ago
by skye16
hey, your poem is pretty good okay, pretty fine and true. i know how ya feel. this person must be pretty important. yeah i know this is comin from a guy, but who cares. just like age doesn't matter when you are 'truly' in love. yeah fifty years is stretching, bt you know what i mean. lol. if ya wanna talk sonetime, aim-yohhaoa, y!-lavateen14, msn-supershadownw1@hotmail.com, icq-219231535. later
