Too Much Pain

by fred   Aug 4, 2005


Too Much Pain

There’s too much pain,
To continue on.
I’ve suffered so much,
To even smile.
My life is empty,
My soul ran away.
My heart stopped ticking,
My friends all hate me.
What can I do,
Look inside me.
I’m still a little boy,
Inside some one grown up.
Tears of blood,
From pain of love.
I can’t cry anymore,
I already lost everything.
There’s no one for me,
My love has gone away.
I don’t care anymore,
I’ve bleed out my sorrows.
The blade is red,
Full of anger and hatred.
Please god show me a sign,
On my path to death.

By Fred Smith

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  • 18 years ago

    by Layonna

    i think it was really good i went and looked at your poems cause you asked me thanks for your coment. i can kinda relate to what you said

  • 18 years ago

    by Layonna

    i think it was really good i went and looked at your poems cause you asked me thanks for your coment. i can kinda relate to what you said

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Most excellent. Your style is cool and so are your poems. I loved this part:
    Tears of blood,
    From pain of love.
    I can’t cry anymore,
    I already lost everything.
    That was very cool. In fact the entire thing was. Continue writing~
    ~Faith of the Fallen

  • 18 years ago

    by CHOKE

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~Kady~

    I bet it must suck to feel that way....SORRY, nice very nice, very sad, very good, keep strong! ^_^ V

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