Ago the days of l♥ ve in early summer

by Sabine Taylor   Aug 4, 2005


As slightly the summer goes by
Reawakened winds approach
Which sweep in the saddened scenery
Away the days of unconcern

Grass turns pale, as faces do
A tree’s beauty fades away
Come alive all spirits of gold
Slowly summertime says good bye

Summer sunshine won’t be forgotten
Anon the world will slip its garb over
Classic colours in lighting so sallow
Announced a landscape’s split personality

Ago the days of love in early summer
Ago the days of love in early summer

PLEASE, TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK, vote and comment, THAT MEANS A LOT TO ME, because it's my first try writing an English Sonnet.

Thanks.
Lots of love
Sabine

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  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Most deff 5/5 you did really well on this one and i really like your writing. i can almost feel summer in this poem i really like stanza 3
    ~sarah

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    This is a great sonnet, I like a good sonnet but this is was amazing. Nice writing (As always).

  • 18 years ago

    by Kane Burden

    Now this was truly excellent!!!! This was a great poem!! From Kane x