That night changed my life

by AnorexicDream   Aug 4, 2005


I was sitting there with my mom and our neighbor
it was such a beautiful night
little did i know
we would all soon be full of fright

then this women was standing at the steps
mom and her began to yell
she reached for something
it was a gun i could tell

first was my neighbor to get shot
right there in the right arm
it went right through
just a night on the porch you never expect to come to harm

then my mum was shot
in the chest right leg and in the head
i ran to try and help her
it was to late she was dead

then my other neighbor jumped off and ran
then the lady with the gun shot ot me
once in the right shoulder
and the left foot it hurt really bad you see

instead of in the foot
she tried to shoot me in the head
flew back
and said you wont make me dead

this is not just a story
but the tale of my strife
this happened october 27th 2004
that night totally changed my life

*about a friend of mine*

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    by GoodMorning

    oh, i just wanted to let you know my new AIM sn is LetsHugSomeTrees lol...hope to talk to you soon...

  • 18 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    wow amanda...it gave me the chills....great poem, as usual, keep it up....i miss talking to you so much....hope you're alright....i figured out how to talk on AIM again....i need your new sn though....i love you *hugs*

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