Independence

by Manda   Aug 5, 2005


Your better off without me,
You get to do things you wanna do.
But just let me say something,
I’m always gonna love you.
From the first day I met you,
You took my breathe away.
I loved everything about you,
Forever I wanted you to stay.
So now here I am,
Saying goodbye.
My heart hurts so much,
But I refuse to cry.
My independence got lost,
In those months we were together.
I have to find it,
To make me better.
It’s a journey,
I have to take.
But I must do it alone,
So we have to break.
I will hold our memories,
Very close to my heart.
And I’ll think of you,
Every minute we’re apart.
I just need to see,
If I can survive on my own.
Always remember,
You’ll never be alone.
As soon as my independence is found,
I’ll come see you.
And if you still want me back,
I’ll gladly come back to you.
So baby boy,
Don’t you cry.
This doesn’t have to be forever,
It’s just a simple goodbye.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Unity

    MANDA!!!
    maii chicky!!!! your an awesome writer, and its about time you start believeing it, thank you for all the comments youve written me ..youve become like .. my best friend poem buddy type of thing :P lolz ..your wunna the only p33pz hu readz ma poems :D :D :D ...your an awesome writer chick! *5/5* ..i hope fings get bettah for u!!! ...all mah luv
    - Unity

  • 18 years ago

    by gorgeouslilmissy

    hey this poem is great!! *5/5* its exactly how i feel atm!! good job, welldone keep up the good work!!
    xx

  • 18 years ago

    by sayo

    OMG so sad so good i dunno weather to cry or laugh its so good ok i kno one thing i love the fact u mentioned ur independence b/c gurl every women needs it lol well check out my poem sometime thanxz :)