Promise me...

by DREA   Aug 7, 2005


From all the promises you didn't keep,
Just please make this one deep, And stay with me even after I fall asleep
In your arms I always wish to be,
Your face is all I want to see,
Just promise me,
You'll always be,
With me,
Never free

Lets make this be an unbreakable chain,
And love is what we will gain,
But never strain,
Cry like a braking train,
Or die like an untamed grain,
Instead love will flow through our veins,
With pleasure not pain

Dedicated to Luis Mendoza

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  • 18 years ago

    by beautyisnomore

    This is really good. Thanks for the comment. I like this a lot. Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sabine Taylor

    Strong write ! The opening "From all the promises you didn't keep,
    Just please make this one deep, And stay with me even after I fall asleep" is brilliantly written and as the last line is, too. The whole structure of your made the word flow and espacially the last stanza is wonderfully written and with so much emotion.

    Keep it :)
    Lots of love
    Sabine

    P.S.: Please, read some of my work and comment, too. Thanks.

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