thats g-8 keep it up and if a guy told me his true feelings like that i would so give him a chance in a heart beat

i love this poem! you did a VERY good job w/expressing your feeling in words very well. hope you write more i'll definately read them!

this poem is amazing,i can relate to what you wrote, its wonderful

Well expressed...beautiful (^^)

iiiii loooooooooooooveee it. what i like about it its that its so realistic but it still makes u say "AWWWWWW". excellent job. 5/5!!

I really liked that good job i can really relate check out mine sometime <3<3

Well nice write - it says a million things.
SO have u put it across to her?The poem shld do the trick for you :)
Wishing u all luck.

Pls do read my poem "FOr You My Love" - I wish to present it to my gf on her bday nxt week.

that was absolutely wonderful! i am amazed by how this poem brought feelings to me! it was great! and i would like to ask you for a favor....so PLEASE e-mail me. okay??? thanks a bunch!

~mandy~
my e-mail is.....

lawyer_gurl_2_be@yahoo.com

it is my private e-mail. so PLEASE e-mail me. I need a huge favor from you. Thanks. laters!

Excellent and i rated it as so...its wonderful and its explaining everything i feel for someone right now

I loved this poem!!!! Awesome job! Keep up the wonderful work!

~BJ~

I have just one word to your poem; Perfect.

WOOOOOOW! That'a all I can say.. GREAT poem!!

Wow. This was a very cute yet romantic poem to read! You sound like a great guy. =] You had a great flow and perfect vocabulary, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

This poem rocks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1Would you mind if i used it for the girl i love/i can relate 6/5

I think this poem is so great!!!

~shanny~

Awesome work

Awesome work

So on point. great one btw :)