<3 Lovely. I loved both parts my dear. You're just as exquisite as poet as you are a person m'love. =) Can't wait for part 3. <3 Love you.

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

this is a lovely poem and this one is just as great as the last part! I really like this part the MOST!

"It was a love full of passion,
with your eyes filled with hate."
so emotional

good job!

-Josiah

Truly a masterpiece, I loved it:)

You write so differently then anyone I've ever come in contact with...you're writing is so unqiue and so creative. I love this...you just have a way with words...It flowed perfectly and such emotion was felt!!! Excellently done---

I like it, its deep but i love the teddy bear thing :D

welll written i really liked it ... can't wait till the 3rd ... 5/5

really good, excellent details! check out sum of mine plz!

awsome write I havent read anything of yours and I can't wait to
love always
Natalie

That was very well written :)
Again loved the flow and like the last one i loved the idea:)

x)

Nicely done M'dear.

"I wouldn't have been a second to late."

I think you meant "too". =)

My favourite lines are:

"It was a love full of passion,
with your eyes filled with hate.
And if I could have read between those lines,
I wouldn't have been a second to late."

Especially the two lines you started out with.

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(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

Beautiful 5/5