Hey hun, this was really good i liked it a lot 5/5 keep up the great work.
Luv ya,
LoVeAbLeShOrTie

good poem. the rhyming was excellent and you didnt try to force and words to rhyme or anything. im sure alot of people can relate to this poem. 5/5

this was a very good poem. keep it up.

aww thats really sad... are you talking about yourself?
Hang in there hun!
love ya!
liz

wow i like it alot...hang in there tho hun..i luv ya
im here if ya need to talk

-angel-
5/5

I really love this poem. It reminds me of a close friend. You're a great writer.

5/5

DFK :-D

Oh i can definitely relate to this poem and i bet lots of other people can too.

I love the way you write, its so fluent n i could really feel the pain in that poem *huggles* i really hope you're okay, if you ever want to chat about things my forum is www.s7.invisionfree.com/xfinding_the_lightx you're very welcome there. *hugs*

T xxxx

excellent, I can relate to it perfectly. really good poem.

Best wishes,
Patrik

Sabrina, everytime you comment on my poems it just brings a smile to my face. What you say is very important to me, because you're such a good writer and this poem proves it. I love ya and thanks for always being there.

Much Love,
Jordan-Paige

very good. Emotion was good, so was the tone and the flow was great. Overall a good read Keep up the good work, you're very talented. ^_^x

Full of strong emotions! I can't relate to self-harm in the way of cutting I turned to drugs and alcohol. Very well written poem and so sad! Brooke~

Thats good...well done i like it..explains me exact

5/5

-angel-

Once again it was well written, personally this one was better, haha it was good and they rhyming was perfect. 5/5

Wow very emotional, I know a lot of people can relate very well to this. You have a good way of putting words together to make the reader feel pain.

Such sadness...I'll try not to keep repeating what I said in the other comments...well done. Emotion expressed openly...I really hope...well, you know...
Take care of yourself. (And it's never to late..)

xxx

I love it i feel it

Wow.............yep wow :)

I like this poem.....iy kinda reminds me of myself somewhat.....keep up the good work and keep writing more poems

Nice poem
it's easy to relate to
5/5

Near-perfect flow and scheme, very nice.