Thinking....

by DANI   Aug 7, 2005


I think alot about the day,
i think alot about the things gone away,
i think of u when I'm down,
i think of us wen no one is to be found,
i wish i could think of what to do,
i want you to know i think of you,
i think of you at least every minute,
i love my life in every way,
because i can say everything i want to say,
my life is sorted now I'm done,
with these evil deeds that have been slung,
i am finished with all those nasty words,
and I'm gonna fly as high as a bird,
do you know why I'm happy too fly?
because you are my life and the good things gone by....

luv ya Jake.p.!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sabine Taylor

    Cute write, espacially the first 5 lines about thinking were pretty good.

    Keep it up, hope to read more such great stuff from you .
    Lots of love
    Sabine

    P.S.: Please, read some of my work and comment, too. Thanks.

  • 18 years ago

    by Hayley Marie

    WOW!!!
    this bit was brilliant it really caught my eye....
    "i am finished with all those nasty words,
    and I'm gonna fly as high as a bird".

    brilliant!
    Hayley-Ree xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by DANI

    this is a very meaning full poem i wrote about my ex....he will always be with me in my heart....

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