ღThese words I wrote for you ღ

by Sabine Taylor   Aug 7, 2005


These words I wrote for you
As the sun goes down and the moon arises
To let you know I love you

In a starlit night like that
I proved my love to you in endless cries
These words I wrote for you

Through hours of joy and pain
When you held my hand, I didn’t pretend
As I wanted you to know I love you

For so long you cared about my soul
Hugged me tight in nights like that
This letter I wrote solely to you

My heart can’t keep still anymore
So far I haven’t found the right words
To show my true love for you

Don’t give me up, nor my love to you
That makes me feel strong and weak in all
These were the words I wrote for you
To let you know how dearly I love you

*PLEASE, VOTE AND COMMENT !!! This would mean a lot to me. Thank you very much. I'll comment back for sure !!!

Lots of love
Sabine

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  • 18 years ago

    by Pilar

    Whoa u are amazing i loved this one i coulg imagine everything throughout the poem
    keep on writing cause u r an axcelent writer

    pili

  • 18 years ago

    by Mark

    great poem! i agree with ^^^ lol the repitition was effective 5/5

    love mark xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    It's Great! You have an original structure that you put some beautiful lines to, and the repetitiveness really pushed it along. The last lines summed up the point and left you thinking of that truly deep love.
    Absolutely Great Job!

    luv kt

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    amazing!!! keep it up!
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Wow... I found this very gripping. This tells a lot, almost like an entire novel. I'm going to read more of your work. Thanks for your comment, but please keep working you've got it!!

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