Half

by Sarah Lea   Aug 8, 2005


~this is for my best friend....Nick~

A girl loved a boy,but he could never see.
How great she really was,or how beautiful she would be.
She told him how she felt,and he just stood there frozen.
She loved this boy so much,he just didn`t know it.
She told him that she loved him,but he had nothing to say.
The only thing that came to mind was one word,"ok."
She felt like she had been rejected,and felt she made a mistake.
Her heart had just been broken,it suddenly began to ache.
Now that she looks back,all she can do is laugh.
She never let him have her whole heart,she only gave him half.

8/5/05
Started:8:57p.m.
Ended:9:11p.m.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jin

    Very good, and good change up at the end... loved the happier ending.... makes you feel like you got even... sort of. =) keep up the great work... I would love to read more.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Lea

    THNX for posting for my poem.....luv yall lotz

  • 18 years ago

    by TeArS R FaLLiNg

    Hey great poem xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    i really like this poem, keep up the great work! good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by kiesha

    That was a great poem. It was really good. Keep writing! Take care and God bless.