OoOoO That was DEEP and really good. This poem is captavating and truely emotionally contained. A true 5/5. I think you meant "breathe" not "breath" in the frist stanze, or maybe I missed some thing (lol :D) But I would also aprecciate if you could reado comment and vote on my poems as wel. Thanx!

-Frank

Wow! You've poured you heart out on this wonderful piece of poetry.5++++

U never cease to make me fall in love with poetry all over again! great job! 5/5

Abcede

This is even better than the other I commented on, well at least just as good.I usually don't care for rhyme as it's hard to do well, but this works.And the subfect hits too close to my heart.... way too close.I feel I can really identify with this piece.

Omg, i am officially in love with you.this is like, my life in words..beautiful beautiful words.the flow is excellent, and i feel your pain so thoroughly..and not just because im in this situation 5/5 XO