My Sacrifice

by Illusion   Aug 9, 2005


~*Note: This is what happens when someone is pushed too far.*~

I light the candle,
That I use every time I’m hurt,
The red candle,
That is only lit when I feel like dirt.

I stare at the flame,
Twisting and turning,
Beautiful colors,
Slowly burning.

I pick up the knife,
That I keep by the candle,
I slowly put it on my wrist,
And push down the handle.

I smile as the blood gushes out,
Blood quickly covers the floor,
I smile as everything begins to fade,
No one will be able to hurt me any more.

Goodbye
I Love you all

Note: This is my suicide note/letter.

Dedicated to Taylor and K

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  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    This is REALLY good but like No More says we would all miss your writing.. You're such a good poet.. If you ever need to talk I know how you feel I cut but I'm trying to stop.. Well anyways always here and keep up the great work!!:-)
    Stephanie

  • 18 years ago

    by AJ

    I agree, really good. If it's your real suicide note I hope you don't do it, then we'd all miss out on your writing. Keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nina

    This is really good. Is this truly how you really feel? Well like I said this is good and this expresses how I feel.

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