The pain you caused me

by Lost in my past   Aug 9, 2005


What is the point in life,
When all it is full of is strife,
This is the pain you caused me.

I've lived these past few years,
Trying to hide my tears,
This is the pain you caused me.

While you are still near,
I wish to longer be here,
This is the pain you caused me.

I wish that I could die,
My life is one big lie,
This is the pain you caused me.

A rubbish life I have led,
but soon I want to be dead,
This is the pain you caused me.

PLZ PLZ COMMENT IT'S MY FIRST MY POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! EVEN IF IT'S RUBBISH.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    Omg that is such a great poem!!! I like the repetition it makes the poem sound very good! Keep up the amazing work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachele

    I think for your fist poem that's really good. I can relate a lot to it. I hope you keep writing..you got some talent. Thanks for the comment :)

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