Angel Of Mercy

by Iyla   Aug 9, 2005


Lying on the floor
like an angel on a shrine
bleeding red tears
as she silently cries

whispering to herself
talking of her pain
down in the fires of hell
the demon made her live this way

lying on the cold hard floor
her breaths growing less
praying for a release
a painless death

her heart shattered
her life falling apart
she knew it would end
right from the start

as she had her last cry
she was finally set free
by a demon called death
the angel of mercy

* random write...horrible...*

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  • 18 years ago

    by ThugPoet

    This poem was faaaar from horrible .. and if u just randomly wrote it .. i look forward to reading nething u might put ur mind to .. hehe .. nicee ... 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by XnotaprettygirlX

    aww darl..im here for ya..and this aint a horrible write...i like it alot!!..ur talented:)

    luv ya
    angel
    5/5 always

  • 18 years ago

    by Crystal

    very well writen..... it wasnt horrible..... it was quite good..... it had a intact depth.... and was easy to follow..... it was a mad job...... i liked reading it.....

    crystal

  • 18 years ago

    by Broke&Lost

    For a random write this isn't horrible. It's really good. Don't we all wish for a painless death...the only way for that though is having to die in your sleep or something similar to that.

    Well anyways keep it up.

    5/5

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