I love this. Don't tell me it's a mess, cos it's perfection. It's about two million times better than anything I could write, and you'll see when you get a million 5's and end on the top rated. <3

Fav stanza:
"But wishes fade away, and dreams slowly die
Stealing my passion and reason to try
Here I'll remain as my wounds forever bleed
Because the coward in me could not succeed"

But the end was really freaking awesome too. Great write Britt, I mean it.

On a personal note, I hope you never try again, and I want you to know, you're not a coward for not succeeding, you're brave for facing this life now, the coward you was the one who tired to escape. <3 I love you Britt, so much more than you'll ever know, and I'm here for you every step of the way on this path of life. I promise. And I love you so much. <3 This poem is awesome and I hope you never end up leaving me, not untill we're old and grey...better days are on their way my dear. Just hold on. <3 xoxoxox

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCareBabyxx

<3

Outstanding job, from the beginning to the end. I read some of your other poems and you have amazing talent. Keep writing!

JJ

Amazing...I mean really...amazing. I can relate to parts of it, and I think I know what you mean...I've felt some of that...and it's really deep and revealing...

"This life of mine is sacred, it cannot be returned
It's God's way of telling me death must be earned
I'll go through life's maze, always slightly twisted
Hoping in the end, I will find that I existed"

I'm glad you realized that...you have an incredible talent and a good heart and a very creative, original mind. Don't ever give up.

I really hope things are getting better for you...I'm sure you've heard this plenty of times before...but I'm always here if you need someone to listen or talk...I know being "alone" is a feeling that's hard to erase even when you're not really alone...I guess you are alone in your mind and there are secrets you have and tell no one so no one can be there to help or support or comfort you...I'm glad you can at least come out with some things in your poetry...honesty is important...and you have it...

Take care of yourself.

Truly,
undying blusher
xxx

P.S. Did I mention it's amazing? ;)

....omfg i have chills lol your poems...are so good i cant even explain it! your deffinately on my favorites list..wow great job 5/5 for sure!
Becky
xoxo

Wow! Another amazing one! But amazing isn't even close to being a strong enough word. You have just written my autobipgraphy on paper, and posted it up for all to see. The I in the story my have been you, but it also fits perfectly as me. Powerful and beautiful and amazing as always. Thankyou for posting.

-Mikochan