Hi well i think it was just fine.. it all went together smoothly and you expressed what you needed to.. thats 2 great things it takes to make a great poem. I think it was overall terrifiv great job.. and i would love to read more when i have more time anyways great job. if you need any advice you can contact me on my aim screen name x0xSweet Sinzx0x. but great job 5/5 xox brit xox

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It does not matter that you did not know how to say it, you got your message across perfectly well. Your image in my mind was raw and passionate which are the best kind of poems. Keep writing and thanks for your advice!

Hey dis was gwd wat were u tlkin abt....n is dat da guy u luv??? so sweet lol...keep it up off to read sum more of yr wanda full poems lol...
mwaz
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