Can't Begin To Describe

by dollbaby   Aug 10, 2005


I can’t begin to describe the feeling I get when you kiss me
I can’t begin to describe the feeling I get when you say you love me
I can’t begin to describe the way I feel when you are not here
I can’t begin to describe the way I feel when you tell me how much you care
I can’t begin to describe the feeling I get when you touch me
I can’t begin to describe the feeling I get when you constantly please me
I can’t begin to describe how our love is so extraordinary
I can’t begin to describe because description is not necessary

Hey people!! I would love it if u guys would rate and comment my poem. I'm a begginer so i need lots of comments and criticism aright. THANX!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sami babii

    wow this is one of ur best...its awsome its shows how u feel and emotion its greart keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Hey YOU! how u doin, lol
    I like this poem, its soo cool.
    I like the technique, the repition of I cant begin to describe, its a phrase that doesnt get tiering, so good job, enjoyed it :)

    ~Peace And Love~
    Francisco

  • 18 years ago

    by dani

    i think its really pretty, you can tell its comin from how you feel inside, i base my poems on experiences and how i feel at that present time. good work keep it up xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Suicidal_Angel

    awww lovely, completely sums up love !

  • 18 years ago

    by Pieces of My Soul

    This poem was good. I could see the direction of it. I still lke you oher one a little better though MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! lmbo! Keep up the good work though!.....

    -Frank